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In the Flesch

A couple of interesting articles from the BBC.

One says that the combined terms and conditions (T&Cs) for the most popular apps are over 128,000 words long.

That's longer than any of the first three Harry Potter books.

The other article says the T&Cs for social sites are harder to read than Dickens.

Simple is best - if you want your reader to understand, and act.

You can measure how complex (or hard to read) your copy is: with the Flesch-Kincaid Reading Grade level.

You want to aim for around grade 7 - the first year of secondary school.

If your writing comes in at Grade 10 or more (in Australia), 80% of the population will struggle. (In the US, it's grade 8.)

This piece came in at Grade 5.9. 

Flesch scores are built into Word: check the preferences. Or use an online tool like Credosity.

Onto the easy-to-read stuff that caught my attention this week.

Kiwi social

Last week, we had the latest Australian stats.

This week, it's New Zealand. Great stuff, from SocialMedia.org.nz.

Some top-line results:

• 3.6 million Kiwis are active social media users
• they spend an average of 1 hour and 53 minutes on social media networks each day
• Facebook is number one, and strongest in the 25-34 age range
• Instagram best for the under 35s
• LinkedIn strongest in the 35 to 54 age range

I miss my regular trips over to NZ. This makes me feel a little closer.

NZ Social Media Statistics 2020 >

Kid's screen time

 

I don't remember taking part in this eMarketer survey.

I must have, though.

It's about children's screen time during COVID.

68% of parents agree screen time has increased. Tick.

60% says they feel they have no choice. Tick

58% say they feel guilty about the time their child spends online. Tick.

49% have had to abandon rules for screen time. Tick.

See what I mean? I must have been part of that survey, because it mirrors my experience perfectly.

Increased screen time for children Is likely here to stay >

 

Santos ad

 

I know a few Santos peeps ('Santosites' I call 'em) read this newsletter.

Just wanted to say I love the TV ad.

Keep seeing it - seems to appear a lot on breakfast TV.

Good stuff. Can't wait to be back in your offices ... at some point.

Santos: Proudly Australian Made >

 

Webinars

 

Remote learning: copywriting courses, by remote. Got an internet connection? You can learn. Pick your topic, then contact me Nice idea, Jon ... >

 

Also rans:

 

The 4 “Love Languages” of Design >

What Does a Copywriter Do? (Infographic) >

What happened on Social in October: monthly round-up >

Top 20 Tools That Will Help You Create Better Content >

5 Sales Copy Editing Tips that can Double Conversions >

 

QotW

 

Quote of the week:

'To swear off making mistakes is very easy. All you have to do is swear off having ideas.' Leo Burnett

 

Next workshops

 

• Maximum Copy: online and in-house
• Copy Ninja: the craft via Zoom, Webex, Teams, GoTo
• Writing for Digital: about the web, over the web

Check 'em out >

 
 
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