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In the FleschA couple of interesting articles from the BBC. One says that the combined terms and conditions (T&Cs) for the most popular apps are over 128,000 words long. That's longer than any of the first three Harry Potter books. The other article says the T&Cs for social sites are harder to read than Dickens. Simple is best - if you want your reader to understand, and act. You can measure how complex (or hard to read) your copy is: with the Flesch-Kincaid Reading Grade level. You want to aim for around grade 7 - the first year of secondary school. If your writing comes in at Grade 10 or more (in Australia), 80% of the population will struggle. (In the US, it's grade 8.) This piece came in at Grade 5.9. Flesch scores are built into Word: check the preferences. Or use an online tool like Credosity. Onto the easy-to-read stuff that caught my attention this week. Kiwi socialLast week, we had the latest Australian stats. This week, it's New Zealand. Great stuff, from SocialMedia.org.nz. Some top-line results: • 3.6 million Kiwis are active social media users I miss my regular trips over to NZ. This makes me feel a little closer. Kid's screen timeI don't remember taking part in this eMarketer survey. I must have, though. It's about children's screen time during COVID. 68% of parents agree screen time has increased. Tick. 60% says they feel they have no choice. Tick 58% say they feel guilty about the time their child spends online. Tick. 49% have had to abandon rules for screen time. Tick. See what I mean? I must have been part of that survey, because it mirrors my experience perfectly. Santos ad I know a few Santos peeps ('Santosites' I call 'em) read this newsletter. Just wanted to say I love the TV ad. Keep seeing it - seems to appear a lot on breakfast TV. Good stuff. Can't wait to be back in your offices ... at some point. WebinarsRemote learning: copywriting courses, by remote. Got an internet connection? You can learn. Pick your topic, then contact me Nice idea, Jon ... > QotWQuote of the week: 'To swear off making mistakes is very easy. All you have to do is swear off having ideas.' Leo Burnett Next workshops• Maximum Copy: online and in-house |