Having Trouble With Your Characters? Learn How to Follow Their PainSometimes you run into a character who you know is awesome—and yet he just doesn’t want to cooperate on the page. He’s not coming across right. He’s stiff, he’s immobile, his dialogue is forced, he just won’t interact
with the other characters in any kind of a realistic or compelling way. What do you do when a likable character just isn’t coming across as likable? I find this happens most often with characters who are good people with rigid personal convictions. The problem is that all this goodness
they’re oozing can very easily end up coming across as goody-goody, know-it-all, or even moralistic. The mentor character in my work-in-progress was behaving in just this way. He was supposed to be the light shining upon the right path
for the protagonist. But mostly he was just irritating the heck out of me by continually harping on our poor protagonist for not measuring up to his ideals of right and wrong. I took a moment to think back on similar characters I had written
whom I loved. What made the difference? Pain, baby. It all comes down to pain. Characters who have rigid moral views and are hypercritical of their fellows can so easily come across as obnoxious (or even scary—St. John Rivers, I’m looking at you). But they don’t have to be.
If readers understand the motivations driving these characters, they won’t pass judgment. If they understand the pain
that has formed these characters’ convictions, they’ll root for them (sometimes whether they agree with those convictions or not). Consider one of our decade’s most popular screen characters: Captain America. He’s as strait-laced as they come. Sure, he’s a nice guy, but he’s also all my-way-or-the-highway
and he ladles out judgments on those around him left and right. In part, we may cheer for him because we agree with some of those judgments. But that’s not what’s keeping him from coming across as annoyingly preachy and dogmatic. So what is? His pain. We understand why
he is the way is, and we sympathize with his tremendous personal losses. Pain in a character’s past adds dimension to his personality. He’s not perfect. He’s a hurting, searching human being just like the rest of us. That’s what brings characters to life on the page and allows them to interact vividly with other characters. Even better, it’s what allows readers to invest in them!
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